Affected Language:
Brazilian Portuguese
Affected Service (Game name, hub, or menu):
XP Booster Menu with boosters available (/booster)
Affected Text:
‘‘Reforço de 50 Porcentual no jogo Todos os jogos…’’
Suggested Text:
‘‘Reforço de 50% em todos os jogos
60 minutos, 15 disponíveis’’
Explanation of Issue:
There are 3 problems:
- First, the sentence makes no sense at all. Translating it back to English it would be something like: ‘‘50 percentage booster in the game all games’’. The suggested sentence fixes the error in the grammatical function of the word ‘percent’, removes the duplicate information that the booster works in all games, and inserts the correct prepositions (no → em)
- Secondly, the sentence is so long that you can’t see the other information about time and quantity. The suggested sentence replaces the word percent with an actual percent symbol to make it smaller, while still maintaining the same context.
Screenshots and/or video:
unrelated, but I think it would look nice to use a capital R in the word ‘reforço’ in ‘Compre reforços’ like in the original text
