Affected Language:
Russian
Affected Service (Game name, hub, or menu):
Monthly Quest Store
Affected Text:
Получайте очки, завершая задания!
Suggested Text:
Зарабатывайте очки по завершению заданий!
Explanation of Issue:
The original translation — “Получайте очки, завершая задания!” — is too vague and slightly inaccurate. It doesn’t fully reflect the word “Earn”, which implies effort and reward, whereas “Получайте” feels more passive. Also, “завершая задания” suggests an ongoing action, while the original English (“by completing”) refers to the result.
My version — “Зарабатывайте очки по завершению заданий!” — is more accurate. “Зарабатывайте” better conveys the meaning of “Earn”, emphasizing active effort. “По завершению заданий” clearly indicates that points are awarded after tasks are completed, matching the original structure and intent more precisely.
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